Dance?

by Kitty Cat Lady   Sep 23, 2017


Your eyes they bore deep into me
Your voice dictates my ears
You command the space around us
No one else invited here

You capture slightly tighter
Slide your hand about my waist
Wrench me flush against you
Execute the steps in haste

You circle round my body
Your fingers never leave
Deliberate, passionate touches
Caress me to the beat

This dance it has us spellbound
In unison we move
Bodies synchronised to time
Nothing else except this groove

Violently you reject me
Make me twist just out of reach
Knowing you'll have to catch me
Return me to your heat

You glower so intensely
Each movement stressed within
Breathing laboured and jagged
We approach the final spin

I'm contoured to your form now
You're anything but polite
We reach the final crescendo
Is this a Tango ... or a fight?

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  • 6 years ago

    by Robin Carretti

    JUST Quite divine lovely your writing hits my heart.

  • 6 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Kitty - A) i hope you dont mind me call you kitty.
    b) excellent write!! Loved it from begining to end. Loved the rhyming and the layout

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Hello fellow crazy cat lady! Of course you can call me Kitty :-)
      Thanks for your lovely comments :-) x
      =^.^=
      Edit: you nominated it! Aw thank you sooo much .. how lovely! xx

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    This is such an amazing write, not everyone's kinda thing but it's deffo my kinda thing.

    May your fire continue to burn

    Craig

    Ps

    Only just seen this, I hope it gets picked up for the weekly contest

    Regards

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Aw thanks Craig, I'm so glad it's your 'kinda thing' ;-) lol x
      =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Aw thanks Craig, I'm so glad it's your 'kinda thing' ;-) lol x
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    I guess this is Tango
    Beautiful

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    What a nice and beautiful flow sure feels like a tango. Take care

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