To my Valentine (Milly's thread)

A blend of love and sensuality. Great work!!

Hi.

the imagery in your first line is both sensual and evocative. Your sentiments of the magic and mystery of two people becoming one, is one I share. Just like the sun heart slowing descending onto the cooling blue ocean. I like too, the explosion of thousands of dandelion seeds - an exquisite way to describe the climax of love.

Most enjoyable.

Your work always takes my breath away

Wonderful!!

I have no idea which line to pick out as a favorite
because they are all so tender and passionately written.
In this short verse there is a fire and I like the image!
Well done!