Mothers day (acrostic) Milly's mothers day thread

by Michael   Feb 22, 2018


May I take this
Opportunity to eternally
Thank you for the
Heart that was
Exhaled from the
Recital you
Sung so loudly for and

Dedicate a chorus of my
Appreciation with love
Year after year

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  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Ahhh, Michael, our king of acrostic! This is one seamless acrostic, the message clear and oozing with gratitude and love.

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Haha King of acrostic, maybe their will be a 'box-set series called that one day :) Thank you Miss Mel :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by naaz

    Sir, first of all, I want to thank your mother for giving birth to a talented poet like you and I want to thank you too for sharing such beautiful poems with us.

    Through this poem you have tried to tell us that we should keep on thanking our mother for giving us this beautiful gift called life.
    Even an eternal bouquet of thanks is less as compare to what she has given - the best of her years - to raise us, to groom us for becoming a better human being.

    Father often blames us or sometimes even beat us for our wrong actions, and in those situations of our life our mother she is the one who always hears the chorus of forgiveness running inside our heart by appreciating the lessons we have learned from those mistakes.

    Sir, one can have many friends, girlfriends, wives or children, but there is only one mother.
    This beautiful, unique poem says love your mother and keep on thanking her until your very last breath.

    At last, Sir, May I ask for one thing?
    Am I allowed to print this on a greeting card and give it to my mother on mother's day?

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Hi Naaz :)

      Thank you for your lovely message. Its a compliment to request my poem for your mothers day card, which is truly appreciated. I'm sorry but I have to decline your offer, as the meaning would be lost from my perspective, and also hasn't come from your heart to your mother. I believe you have what it takes to write a special heart-felt poem for your mother, that would be far more special than using this one :) However that doesn't stop you or anyone else requesting another poet to write a poem especially for an occasion etc. But as I mentioned Naaz you are a poet, so the beauty would come from your words and your writing. I hope this makes sense, and again I'm honoured that you asked, and again thank you naaz. I would like to be the first to read it :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    I'm so envious of your acrostics Michael! This one is another great one :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Oh Miss Kitty, what a lovely compliment. Come on get your 'acrostics' out (no euphemism! haha
      :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Beautiful Michael

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank Miss Dagmar :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    PS Thank you for taking the Mothers Day challenge x

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