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by Matt Carroll Apr 3, 2018
Sadness, depression /
Bleeding hearts and hollow eyes
Splintered souls and stifled cries
Oh my, how I've come to despise
The carelessness within your lies
I'm sure for you, that time just flies
It matters not what this implies
It's true, that you don't hear my sighs
As another piece of me just dies
by - Mr. Darcy
Great flow in the 1st verse, Matt. May I offer a suggestion for the last line - I feel this may help with the flow:
"as another piece of me just dies"
by Matt Carroll
Thank you for your comment, and the suggestion!
by Phoenix ¥
Well rhymed Matt x
Thank you! Just one of those random thoughts I had that I decided to write down.
by Ben Pickard
by Kitty Cat Lady