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by Hellon Jun 20, 2018
Life, society /
...and, I shiver as
I watch the last leaf fall
and slowly drift in
the wind that winter
it was our tree for many a year...
we laughed, read, ate apples,
hiding under the canopy
of its summer splendor.
Yes, we thought the world
was our oyster then and time was
something only old people worried about
that was not to be in
our story...@Hellon 20 June 2018
Elegant, lovely poem! I think trees are quite symbolic, and you paint a rebatable and sad story here. The metaphor of things around us ending is always a poignant one
Nice poem carry on
by Em (marmite)
Oh wow!! All I can say is I'm glad to see this nominated as I'm lost for words
by Milly Hayward
A lovely emotional piece. Milly x
by Maple Tree
Your poetry and this poem for one is touching and elegant. I love your crafty way of blending words with your emotions and moments in time. Beautiful!
by Kitty Cat Lady