by Star Feb 10, 2019
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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“You have the right to |
by D.
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A nice, elegantly written little piece you have here. I liked the metaphor, save from the PENultimate (sorry :D) stanza which I don’t feel is completely necessary. Well done :) |
by Star
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I had mixed feelings about it as well, but could you please tell me why you think so? I would really like to know :) |
by Star
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Thank you ladies ^_^ |
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A lovely piece. Glad to see it nominated. Milly x |
by Maple Tree
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Metaphor with elegance... |