Faults

by Star   Apr 15, 2020


The shattering
continued today
she felt empty,

the pounding
inside of her
became harsher.

Chills slowly traced
her crooked spine,
her posture crashed.

Tears thickened
as they sweetened
her bitter time.

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  • 4 years ago

    by Michael

    A sad piece STAR, but such a nice end to your poem :) M

    • 4 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you Michael and Mark :)

  • 4 years ago

    by prasanna

    I really love the imagery in this but in the last stanza wow!

    "Tears thickened
    as they sweetened
    her bitter time."

    !!

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