Enchanted Dawn

by Star   Apr 21, 2020


It's this time of the day
that my spirited soul
sips on clouds.

The hushed world
dresses me
in a gown of silence,
and the preaching
golden rays
paint
my brown eyes
hazel.

But today,

my heart
is fluttering
the skies
poured their
magic here,

so

I'm sending you
stars
on west winds.

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  • 1 month ago

    by Lost star

    This is wonderfully written, just mesmerising, I had to favorite it. Perfect.

    • 1 month ago

      by Star

      Thank you!

  • 5 months ago

    by hiraeth

    This is such a beautiful depiction of golden hour. You made it even sweeter with the ending stanza of sending stars to them, it made me think this was an equal exchange; the sun lends you light, and you lend back love for the sun to carry to someone else, really endearing :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Rania Moallem

    someone already nominated this, I would have nominated it too. I would love to read this poem for a week whenever I launch the front page. I love it, each word of it.

    • 6 months ago

      by Star

      ^_^ thank you that means a lot!

  • 6 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    Such a sweet and tender write which has a softness to it...nice :)

    • 6 months ago

      by Star

      Thank you so much!

  • 6 months ago

    by Michael

    Sweet and endearing STAR, nicely penned. M :)

    • 6 months ago

      by Star

      Thank you both ^_^

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