Paradoxical II (Senryu)

by ddavidd Oct 17, 2021 category : Miscellaneous / Misc. poems

Just a touch of death
is what sometimes bring us back
to the existence.

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4 years ago
by Larry Chamberlin

excellent!
- 4 years ago
  by ddavidd
  
  Thanks Larry.
4 years ago
by Everlasting

wouldn’t it sound better if the second line said:

sometimes it is what bring us?
- 4 years ago
  by ddavidd
  
  Thanks I think the problem is fixed now.