by Cantchangeme Aug 5, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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Images have danced |
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This poem made me feel really sad. It really struck a cord with me and pulled at my heart strings. |
by Ink
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Hi there, I really like this poem, I find myself drawn to darker poems at the moment, the rhyming is spot on and when read out loud it really carries weight. Regards Ink |
by Lost star
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Beautiful structured poem, wonderfully written. |
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I just came accross this little gem and had to add it to my favourites. Great rhyming and pace. I really love the paper theme that runs throughout. It portrays the fragility of it all. This is compelling, emotional and dynamic and is an an immediate favourite. Well done on an excellent piece. Milly x |
by Michelle18
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Another well written poem from you.... i like this one. |