Was so young

by Shana   Nov 14, 2004


My Daddy is a cop
He hides his gun under the bed
But one time he left it on top
For he didn't know the carpet would be covered with red

A friend came over that day
When we went to play, I noticed the gun
We only wanted to play cops and robbers I say!
I guess I thought it would be fun

I pointed it to my face and... I got shot
I fell to the floor with a thud
I thought I put it on safety, but I did not
I laid in my own puddle of blood

Mommy screamed out what happened to my son
Everyone yelled with much disdain
Daddy dialed 911
I felt no pain

As I floated to the heavens
An angel reached out her hand
I screamed out, I am only seven!
I went with her and she brought me to a new land

Daddy has much guilt
Mommy is so sad
They both lost the family they built
I am so sorry so please don't be mad!

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  • 19 years ago

    by jennifer

    Very heartfelt, very amazing, I loved it, very sad you are an amazing writer

  • 19 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    I just wanted to say that I enjoy this poem and that you should keep on writing:) *Take Care* ^God Bless^
    ~Check some of them~

    ~!~Love Sedusha~!~

  • 19 years ago

    by Shana

    thanks for the comments everyone I really appreciate them! :) be sure to look at my others they are pretty good also...

  • 19 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    Awesome poem, you keep coming up with good ones, although it is sad, I liked it. Good Work

  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    Very nice Shana. Different from anything i've ever read before. Well done.