I Will Always Care

by Robert   Feb 7, 2005


You are unlike any you have come across before,
you speak from the heart and see your inner core.
You challenged me to go beyond what I thought I could,
knowing you were right and showed me you could.
The hurt in my eyes the pain that I held in,
were just small limitation for the passion you saw within.
You talked to me as a friend trying to understand me,
but slowly through words of wisdom you found I could be set free.
Words oh so many men boasted to me in play,
but you held fast knowing I would never take you away.
Now the words are spoken from a man I came to love,
and as he whispers those sweet secrets for I feel he is a gift from above.
I have seen his face and read his poems from your mind,
and you some how have shown me a world where I am no longer blind.
Your manner is crass, tactless at best,
but some how have passed all my taunting tests.
No touch has been shared by you as of late,
but when you speak I know I have found my fate.
You whisper passionate secrets hoping that I feel the say way,
trying to understand why you just don’t walk away.
I am drawn to you that I cannot deny,
but the true question is really why?
Why am I in love with you, why do I melt from his simple request,
for in my mind this man has simply become my best.
A friend that I hold dear to my heart,
yes a true person I found from the start.
One I can go to when I truly feel alone,
for I have made you my rock my stable stone.
You are what I always wanted in a man some thing that stemmed from a dream,
but when I am away from you I just want to scream.
I know you have life and I have mine,
but in the darkness I crave you just like the rich crave their wine.
Still will we ever come so close that I can feel your touch and caress,
for it is a longing for me I must confess.
I close my eyes and hold tight to what image I have near,
for with a soft voice and a hello you will take away my fear.
I love you that I must declare,
and as we talk I want you to understand I will always care.

Written By
Robert Lee Niswander
Copyright 2005

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  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen

    The message of the poem was written in depth and i loved every single emotion put into it and can be found in it. Just my friendly suggestion, although you dont have to consider if this means originality, i think the poem will be easy to comprehend and for the reader to analyze if its written by stanzas. In that case you can actually determine where the stress of the poem is, and every stanza is like a continuation of the previous that can make a poem a curious read. Hmm..xDD..it was just my opinion and please disregard if you find it unnecessary. But honestly speaking your choice of words come from the heart and as i said before written with depth. I liked it though however you write it. its the talent that counts not the forms..Good job..

  • 17 years ago

    by Jaymes Haze

    Quite the long poem, and I know this comment won't completely suit it.
    But I loved how you ended the poem, despite it's predictability.

  • 17 years ago

    by noha

    Nice flow and rhyme, beautiful words make each like different and interesting way ,great jop

  • 20 years ago

    by Frankie

    Well, I'm adding you to my favorites list after three poems, because I'm addicted!

  • 20 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    Sweet hon

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