Stop!

by Andrea   Feb 9, 2005


Stop yelling at me!
I haven’t did anything to you
Can’t I rest since I have the flu?

Stop hitting me!
It hurts so much but you choose it
Can’t I live a day without these bruises?

Stop tempting me!
The blade lies in my hand
Can’t I cut to make you understand?

Stop these tears of mine!
Everyday they fall and cause a stream
Can’t I be happy like a dream?

Stop putting me down!
Your words only hurt worse
Can’t I exist without life’s curse?

Stop, Stop just stop everything!
My pain, my suffering, my life
Can’t I ever stop this never-ending strife?

*Sorry, I know its bad. But it's what I felt the other day*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Bret Higgins

    You represent futility so well in this poem. Your ability to express emotion is breathtaking sometimes.

    I thought the first stanza's rhyme of you and flu sounded a bit forced, but it works all the same and if it really was the case then it's actually quite good! Strange eh?

    I'll read some more soon.

    Bert

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    I think I'm commenting while your on, I really enjoy reading your poems, Its good to have things to relate to, Thanx for the comments, I like reading peoples opinions on my work, keep it up, love katie! xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Minkus

    I don't think it's bad at all, just maybe the rhymes a little bit forced. good job though! Nice pattern.

  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Touching and really good. It's not as bad as you claimed.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Sad and so touching. I hope you feel better. Take Care lol

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