Rid the fears

by confusion   Apr 12, 2005


As the storm clouds begin to gather
and the thunder starts to strike
my guardian angel manages to rescue me
guiding me a path towards the light

pure goodness like hers is hard to find
always worries for others, never herself
surely its not right for her to hurt
when shes had the lower hand dealt

let her fly to the place in her dreams
where she can do and say as she wants
rid the skeletons from her closet
vanished from sight, so they cannot haunt

please, let her be happy again
as she makes me when I'm down
take the worries, scatter them as ashes
then tred them deep into the ground

the sun will shine into her soul
brightening every inch in sight
the lurking shadows will wither
killed by the incoming light

past memories will stay behind
and never dare to reappear
the feelings of being cold and alone
will start to fade, then disappear

more looking forwards instead of back
as happiness overpowers all sorrow
only thoughts of hopes and smiles
will come with each brand new tomorrow

so wipe all visions haunting
the fears that cause unwanted frowns
let her be truly happy, as she deserves
and never let her fall back down

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  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Oh this was brilliant hun!! Especially this bit:

    As the storm clouds begin to gather
    and the thunder starts to strike
    my guardian angel manages to rescue me
    guiding me a path towards the light

    That was the best bit i think, such flawless imagery, you really are so talented, never forget that ok! Here for you still xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    thats awesome, i thought it was great, i picked out a stanza to put that i really liked cause of the wonderful imagery and as i was going through its like oo i wana put that too and that...
    "please, let her be happy again
    as she makes me when I'm down
    take the worries, scatter them as ashes
    then tred them deep into the ground"
    i loved the imagery in that, it was brill i thought.
    if she reads it she will love it,
    all ma luv, still here if ya need me, though u probly dont now wit... o ne mind
    ellie
    xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    wow really sweet peom with a strong message.the only thing is i think the last two lines of the third staza struggle to follow on...hope u dont minnd me saying so luv! i espec like the first stanza as u related tito a storm! really good.
    hope ur okay...take care
    xxxLoUxxx

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