Darks Come to Save Me (Acrostic)

by Dark Savior   Apr 30, 2005


Darks been there helped when I was mis-guided.
Are all the things he says the truth?
Retribution and retaliation are what was provided.
Kept locked away, he was never obtuse.

Never Lost But he was always retrieved.
Essentially he is a part of me forever.
Science can't prove him, they can't conceive.
Since we were little, he has always been better.

It was only he was there to dry my eyes.
Without hesitation he was there without a word.
Nothing could stop him, especially not a lie.
Silently, would protect me from everything absurd.

Misinterpreted friendships for true love.
I to would see them as a sign from above.

Always stood ready to fight by my side.
Only to have him pushed away like trash.
Utterly understanding my wish's he did abide.
Look into my eyes and you'll see dark Flash.

- Look the letter from each sentence, they make up a phrase. hope you enjoyed..put a lot of effort into it.

© 2005 Shaun M.K

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  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    DARKNESS OWNS MY SOUL - Brilliance. All that effort payed off...and yes, I enjoyed. :)

    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    *claps*....nice work shaun, i really like it...keep it up =)....take care ~much love~

    -brittnay- ((5/5))

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    DARKNESS OWNS MY SOUL!

    Great Write! Talented!

    5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

    Nidhi's Love, Amit.

  • 19 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    Great poem... I love how the first letter form a phrase. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Probably your best yet. And the poem's called an Acrostic ... anyhow, dark's not your better half, the justice of your heart is. Best of luck to you!

    Love you,
    Heather
    ps 5