Almost...

by Rolo   May 4, 2005


I'm only halfway broken,
just a little gone,
Almost to the brink,
Almost fully drawn

I'm just a little sad
only slightly torn
I only wish sometimes
that I was never born

I almost feel insane
I'm not always lonely
A few people feel like me
I'm not the one and only

I'm somewhat of a quitter
I kinda know what's wrong
I'm not strong enough to deal
I knew that all along...

I'm near the edge of reason
A few steps and I'd be there
A little to the right,
And maybe you would care

I was just about to make it
So close, but I fell short
It was almost meant to be;
My second to last resort

I'm midway through the battle
I'm near the end of going away
I'm almost completely certain
That I'll never be okay

~rolo

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  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    good poem. your a good writer

  • 18 years ago

    by Content

    I can really relate to this - excellent poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Shy

    Very nice

  • 18 years ago

    by Maddie

    Very well written poem. With the first stanza i knew it would be another excellent poem. i see nothing wrong with it at all, great job

  • 18 years ago

    by Robyn Park

    This was an excellent poem. The only suggestion that I have is that you might change, "I'm not strong enough to deal I knew that all along..." to "I'm not strong enough to deal. I've known that all along." Just a suggestion though. Other than that, this was a very well written poem. Keep it up.

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