To He Who Tries Too Hard

by Johnny Marlin   May 30, 2005


To he who tries too hard
Take a look around
To he who tries too hard
Stop staring at the ground

To he who tries too hard
You have everything to lose
To he who tries too hard
Life is only what you choose

To he who tries too hard
Stop wishing for your death
To he who tries too hard
Just take a deep breath

To he who tries too hard
Life could be much worse
To he who tries too hard
Your life is not a curse

To he who tries too hard
You do have a say
To he who tries too hard
Live life for today

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kymberly

    Awsome poem! Your really good..Keep it up =D

  • 18 years ago

    by Richard

    great write i sorta live like this trying to hard to make every1 happy and i wish to die everyday 5/5 :(

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    I can certainly relate, being one of those people. I like it, well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    Not a long poem, but just the right length. you speak volumes in only a few sentences. You have real talent. I hope you submit more work. I place thee on my faves list.

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    inspiring....thats what i got from it...erg osrry i'd make a longer msg but ma bro is buggin me!!! bya

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