Thinner (drunk)

Maturity is present
I want to find a wife
But all these stupid girls
Just stick me with a knife

that was my part
it was a greatpoem, i really loved it!!! i was trying to comment and vote on revamped but i am on the school computer and it wont let me read 'locve' poems so i will comment on it when i get home!!!

Lucy***

You couldn't have been that drunk unless the
unconscious poet within you decided to come out. Just the fact you were drunk displeases me, but the poem is pretty good. It's a shame when a talented person like yourself goes destroying his brain cells...pity.

"Hold it in you hands"

Should be "your hands."

Take care of yourself. okay?

xxx

great poem, i like it!

love & hugs

Hey. This is good, i like it great job. If u can will you please rate my poems thanks..

haha i liked this poem...nice..