Save your pity (song)

by Johnny Marlin   Jul 1, 2005


The prophets say
The end is near
I think to myself
Why should I fear

I take a step forward
But then I'm back
I look at my life
And it all goes black

(Chorus)
Why o why must I be wrong
Why o why can't I be strong
Why o why must I live my life this way
Just save your pity for another day

I retrace the steps
That lead me here
But in my head
All I have is fear

I'm trying too hard
But now it's too late
I'm too ignorant
To give into fate

(chorus)
Why o why must I be wrong
Why o why can't I be strong
Why o why must I live my life this way
Just save your pity for another day

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  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    wow! this was a excellent song! i wonder how it actually sounds!...this was ma fav part:

    "I take a step forward
    But then I'm back
    I look at my life
    And it all goes black"

    Real creative ans nicely put! Keep up da awesome work!....also thanx for ur kind words regarding my own poetry!
    Good Luck!
    ~Chica~

  • 18 years ago

    by William Flores

    very deep song indeed! like the emotion and structure behind it. come check out some of my writings if you have the time...

  • 18 years ago

    by ~ღ~ jeSSica ~ღ~

    great poem, i like it 25/5! =)

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    well now it's perfect...i like the chorus too. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by SHYSTY23KO

    Very good. The end of the chorus was hard to follow, i would love to hear it sung! Good job!

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