Will You Save Me?

by Torn   Aug 9, 2005


I never told a soul,
I never accepted myself.
For exactly what i was,
So i chose to pretend.
I've now realised what i am,
And worse, who I've become.
This person i don't like,
I can't stand to watch ruin me.
These nightmares i have,
They wake me every night,
From a disturbed and uneasy sleep.
My 'friends' watch me die,
And stand by me smirking.
For they are happy at last,
This burden has left them.
Then dreams of my death,
So graphic and so real,
Make me smile and laugh,
Because I've finally kept the deal.
I wake up alive,
Disappointment runs through.
For in these dreams so real,
My wish had come true.
No-one even wants me here,
So why suffer and try,
And make something of this life,
When no-ones there standing by?
So now all i need to do,
Is say goodbye to you,
The only one who cares,
And who'd cry at my death.
I'm pushing you away,
But you're still holding on.
Maybe you'll end up saving me,
Then again, maybe not.

*please comment and rate would mean a lot...not quite sure about the title yet!*
Take care x x x

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  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    "So now all i need to do,
    Is say goodbye to you,
    The only one who cares,
    And who'd cry at my death.
    I'm pushing you away,
    But you're still holding on.
    Maybe you'll end up saving me,
    Then again, maybe not."

    I know this is an old poem of yours, but I think it is just as fun sometimes to read the old as it is the new. I know you didn't write this poem to me, but I am pretending that you did. So in response to the last few lines that I copied all I have to say to your goodbye is a hello and reminder that I am not leaving you. Writer's block or no, I hope things are going forward for you in a positive way. Hugs.

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aww hun, wow i can really relate to this poem, each one of your poems is like a chaper inside of a beautiful book of memories and secrets, and i feel like that book is my autobiography, well done hun, I'm blown away really, this is beautiful

  • 18 years ago

    by Always Smiling

    that was really good.... just remember that even though it feels like ur friend aint there.... they are :) and all u have to do is talk to them xxxx

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