by Richard Aug 25, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
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As the world goes on by, |
by PS
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Its well written but im not sure what you are trying to say. |
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Very well written. I loved it. I like your style of writing, keep up the amazing peices of poetry. |
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This poem is good. I like how you named it Para-Noid. It looks cool, lol. |
by Michelle
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Pretty good.... 5/5! :o) keep up the great work! |
by Darien
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This is a pretty good poem. The only thing is, the first line doesn't make sense. A minor grammar error I guess. It didn't ruin the poem however, because on it's own, it's great. Keep up the good work my friend :) |