Choices

by Goth   Sep 7, 2005


We all make choices,
In our life,
In hopes of one day,
They will all be right.

The choice is yours,
When you decide,
Even if you,
Just want to apologize.

Choosing deception,
Or even a lie,
Doesnt make it right,
It just buys you more time.

1 lie, 2 lies, 3 lies, 4
You tell one lie,
Youll have to tell more

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  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    There couldnt be a more truthful poem in the world... very creative and nice job!!

    sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    This poem has a great message in it about lying and that is it just better to tell the truth in the first place. I think you expressed your opinion on it very well. Keep up the great work.

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great poem. the ending was very good

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Okay so ive read three so far...and they are all SO simple...and I mean one surface poem is okay two is okay but you have to write something deeper then what it is at first sometime...

    1 lie, 2 lies, 3 lies, 4
    You tell one lie,
    Youll have to tell more

    that was pretty F'n sweet keep things like that up, i liked that part ALOT!

    4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    Good poem it flowed nicely, didn't really rhyme much but still flowed well. graet job once again!

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