I dont care (Rhyme)

Dam I know wat u mean i went the same way n it sucked, well great poem 5/5

In the poem you don't sound too sure of what you're saying, there's a lot of "think" and "might." For the reader to believe the poem, the poet must, and it doesn't sound too convincing. I like the simplicity because it sounds like a couple bluntly trying to work it out, and then realising there is no point. It's quite short, and doesn't say much, but then again sometimes couples on the brink of separation don't say much either.
Keep writing.

OoOoOo this is really good..i think im in love with it lol 5/5 deffinately! Great job!
Thanks for the comment
Becky
xoxo

Great poem i love it it has alot of emotion in it 5/5 good job

Seems kinda harsh but you get the point across well.