Two Me's

by Torn   Sep 20, 2005


*re-posted*

I know how i want to feel,
But i just can't seem to heal.
These thoughts in my head,
I feel I'm better off dead.
Why is it that I've got two sides?
I just want to run and hide.
I can't deal with having two me's,
I can't choose, i just can't see.
I'm so lost inside,
My emotions, i cannot subside.
The world around me is great,
Although things i do regret.
I've been so wrong,
This story is just too long.
But every night there are tears,
I still can't seem to face my fears.
People only seem to take,
And then come forward my mistakes.
I wish i could soar like a dove,
Maybe then I'd be more loved.
I always gave my all,
But I'd always seem to fall.
I wanted to do this right,
But I've lost all strength to fight.
No matter what you say,
I've never been worse than today.

*please comment, i really need to know that someone's out there..*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rhinehalt

    Hmm.... interesting poem.... If this poem is about you truely, then it seems there's someone out there that's know the same feeling I know.

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥•oOo MaDdiSoN ♥•oOo[[i LuV JoSiE]]

    Yes huni, i am out here always 4 y0o, if y0o ever need someone i will always be here, ur a special girl, plz believe in urself, dont let the means people get y0o down, u r better than them and y0o deserve every bit of happiniss, i wish people werent so cruel, and if there is something i can do 4 u just tell me....when y0o think that nothing could get worse just wait 4 a rainbow, eventually it will come, u just need 2 hold on thru the rain...i luv y0o huni...member that **hugs**

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Well, it seems that u hv a habit of getting (5/5), u hv series of successful poems and may u keep on adding one by one.....great work once again...love

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    You know I'm always her for you...don't worry hun...things will get better...

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Wow this one was really good too, I liked it alot, hang in there, and if you ever need someone to talk to, i'm here, keep up the great work, your really gifted, 5/5

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