Lost in the storm. (Ballade)

by Steven Beesley   Oct 2, 2005


Lost in the storm:

The winds whispering through the trees.
Cool breeze blows gently on my skin.
The tides now so rough in the seas.
Grey clouds in the sky seem to spin.
Moist salt spray settles on my chin.
The shoreline not very distinct.
Remaining light becoming thin.
The day's warmth becoming extinct.

Twilight's grace, a beautiful tease.
Now slowly the night will creep in.
Day surrenders to night with ease.
Difficult to see where I've been.
Think I am lost, I have a grin.
Everything is so indistinct.
I trod and kick an empty tin.
The day's warmth becoming extinct.

Then I trip and fall on my knees.
My nasty mood will now begin.
Getting cold, I begin to sneeze.
The light fades fast, I cannot win.
Now I limp, I have a sore shin.
It appears, I need my instinct.
Starts to rain, put on my oilskin.
The day's warmth becoming extinct.

A storm is about to begin.
Roaring thunder so in-extinct.
Find refugee to shelter within.
The day's warmth becoming extinct.

Steven Beesley (c)

Ballade:
A French form composed of 3 stanzas of 8 lines each and an envoy of 4 lines, with the last line of each stanza being a refrain. Usually 8 or 10 syllables per line.
The rhyme scheme is ababbcbC ababbcbC ababbcbC bcbC.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    Such a wonderful poem.I admire your use of traditional forms yet still conveying such meaning and emotion.This piece is quite impressive.You are truly one of the best poets on this site and an inspiration to us all.

    Gary Jurechka

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    The day's warmth becoming extinct - what a beautiful way to express what is today is extinct tomorrow!

    great work Steve!

    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Wow..........this is one of the best poems i've ever read... absolutely beautiful!!! keep it up!
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Steven,
    Just beautiful! You're an inspiration to many of us...and this great poem's just perfect. I was feeling down before reading your poem but it brought a big smile to my face. Thanks for sharing and always keep it up. Awesome poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    A beautiful piece, Steve. Truly enjoyed
    and well done...

    hugs, love, Ann