Daddy What Do You See?

by Torn   Oct 3, 2005


I wonder what you see,
When you raise that fist.
Do you see that girl you hate,
Do you picture her wrists?

The proof that shows,
All her guilt and pain.
Her own little way,
Of staying sane.

Or do you see her insanity,
That shows every night.
You bring the worst out of her,
Upon every single fight.

Do you think of all the fights,
Do they play over in your head?
Her insanity shows,
With everything you said.

Do you realize what you say,
How they affect her so.
Damaging her heart,
Leaving her alone and low.

Do you see that broken child,
Who is crying out for help.
But all you seem to give,
If those fists that make her yelp.

Can't you hear all her pain,
It's so clear, can't you see.
This girl is so empty,
Daddy can't you see me?

*really hard poem to write...among the tears...comments would be so appreciated*
Thank you all xoxo

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  • 18 years ago

    by Monique

    Hey there,
    are you ok hun?...:( *hugs* well.. this is a great piece of writing, I enjoyed reading it, heartfelt. good job
    Monique

  • 18 years ago

    by Rhinehalt

    Great writing. Very deep. Brings back memories for me. But very good, dark poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    I understand what you are trying to say...and I wrote some of the poems in tears too...and it's so difficult...but we just need to put it down...be strong...I'll be here...wish I can be there...

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Seeing as how you said this was hard to write im guessing its true and im so sorry about that thats terrible. but this was another great poem you havnt written one i have any bad things to say about yet i really enjoy readin all of your stuff your very talented

  • 18 years ago

    by unprotected lover

    A chica im sorry great poem, check out my new poem