Reaching Out

by Torn   Oct 21, 2005


I said i would be OK,
That i would try my very best.
To get out of this great hole,
And out among the rest.

But happiness i can't find,
It seems somethings after me.
Haunting my every smile,
Until i can no longer be.

Things keep going wrong,
Crumbling walls are closing in.
Losing the little hope i built,
This war is impossible to win.

I just want someone to hold me,
To love me and care.
To not be ashamed,
And to see that I'm there.

I just need a little push,
To help me get through.
So that I'm not all alone,
And not always blue.

I'm reaching out for help,
My tired, limp hand.
Has been waiting for so long,
It just wants to be found.

This is my cry out loud,
This is my plea.
To all of you out there,
This will be my last bleed.

I'm stopping because i have to,
I wont watch you die.
I'm going to be strong,
I'm going to move on, no more lies.

I just need you by my side.

*please comment, it would mean so much...*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah Mirabile

    Awesome Poem - if you ever need me I'm here!

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Dunno I shud hv posted my comments on all these poems from SO long!!!
    I totally loved this poem. I was on the mood 2 read sum sad and dark poems so I'm checkin all ur feaured poems. lol
    good luck gal
    Lov
    NemO x0x0x0x0x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Aww.. so sad, but very very well written, for such a long poem, mind would have been all over the place, but you made it flow very well and handled it good, great job i loved it, and thanks so much for the comments on mine, by the way, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Amazing poem, tho so full of sadness.. i especially like the last stanzas in ur poem, starting from the 5th stanza and on.. gr8 job writing this, i cud feel the negative emotion.. hope ur OK
    keep smiling, and if u ever need 2 talk, u noe where to find me
    take care
    Nannoush

  • 18 years ago

    by the middle

    Wow... good poem...i'm always here... u know that right?? whenever you need that little push.
    love ya, miss u
    xoxoxo

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