It Hurts So Much *to kate*

by Torn   Nov 2, 2005


I don't want to look at you,
Because it breaks my heart.
That I've given up on us,
Without putting up a fight.

But I'm so incredibly tired,
And just too weak.
To try and solve us,
When it'll only last week.

I don't think you know,
How much you have hurt me.
You just seem to forget,
All my pain you can't see.

I can't take you back,
After everything you've done.
And the thing that hurts the most,
Is that we were once one.

We've said horrible things,
I guess it wasn't meant to be.
That 'you and me forever,
Until eternity'.

Just know that I do love you,
Although that wasn't shared.
My bestest friend I have lost,
We're both forever spared.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Failed Attempt

    Hmmmm wat to say anna, i miss us but i don't think will ever be the same agin it feels we both have moved on and don't want to make the effect to get our friendship back i just don't no what to do. i don't think you know what u want and in tern neither do i?

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    This was awesome i know exactly how you feel i've lost a few really good friends and sometimes it's forever and sometimes things work out, and really i think everything that happenes will make you a better person in the end well if not better stronger anyways. so i hope things work out with you and your friend but if they don't i hope you deal with things the right way, as for the poem it was wonderful flowed good and rhymes were awesome 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Great poem i really liked this one
    keep up the good work!!

  • =( this is really sad, probably because i can relate to it so much. the amount of times my best friend and i have had fights and decided to "never be friends again" the horrible and nasty things we have said to each other...are just not enough to keep us apart forever. in time your wounds will heal...she probably doesnt deserve your forgiveness right at the moment but everyone deserves a second chance. best friends fight all the time, it helps to make the friendship stronger. if you and your friend really were as close as this poem suggests, then youll both realise sooner or later that you are strong enough to get through this and to move on. as much as you dont want to forgive her, in the end...if you dont youll just end up missing her and wanting her back. its really hard, i know...but stay strong =) and yeh... i just typed like a life story there for you =P and also dont think im telling you what to do, its just my silly opinions. because i know what its like. anyway tata xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy B

    Losing a friend is a terrible thing, especially in this cruel world.

    Good poem still
    Tim