Didn't I Die?

by Torn   Nov 8, 2005


My head's in a blur,
I can't see around.
Where am i?
Didn't i drown?

A sharp headache,
Refuses to let me sit up.
So i lie there thinking,
How i ran out of luck.

I remember taking those pills,
And then i cut my wrists too.
Then i stood high on that bridge,
And fell toward you.

My luck was running well,
I had at least got to here.
No one interrupted me,
I was their worst fear.

And now I'm sitting here wishing,
That my friend will take me in.
Into hell I'm bound,
No-one should forgive my sin.

So I'm lying here hanging,
By a fragile single thread.
Wishing i was gone far,
Wishing i was dead.

** not quite sure what provoked this...just random thoughts..hmm
So obviously not true...very confused..it just poured out of me...
please comment and vote xoxo

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  • 13 years ago

    by Nee

    Amazingly written!!!
    its sweet and true. I can feel the words from inside!!!
    keep it up
    much luv
    NemO x0x0x0x0x

  • 13 years ago

    by Liarr

    Its friking awsome!!!!! *-* woot

  • 13 years ago

    by firexflys

    Well glad to know it's not true. but it's a good poem put together well. keep up the good work 5.5

  • 13 years ago

    by Brandon

    I loved the poem and the memories it brought back seems so real. I like the fact that you wrote what you feel. Hey keep up the good work and if you have a chance look up Afterlife on mine and please comment if nothing else

  • 13 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    It's ok to be confused, as long as you realize it, so then you can get help

    this poem was dark, lovely and descriptive, and overall a very nice poem