Save me

by Stephy   Nov 22, 2005


Lost in deep sea
Drifting away from shore
I don't remember how to swim
Save me from these never ending waves

Abandoned in the night
No stars to be seen
I'm scared of the dark
Save me from this black sky

Walking in the snow
Alone in a cold white world
I'm frozen to the bone
Save me from this chilling weather

Left on the stake
The fire burning my skin
I can feel blood boiling in my veins
Save me from these hot flames

Forgotten on my own
Losing all the happiness I knew
I am my worst enemy
Save me from myself

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  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Aw hun great poem. I hate that yo're feeling so sad though.
    Your vocab was brilliant i felt a part of that experience like no other..
    I hope you're ok
    take care
    anna xoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by RachelAnne

    Hey,
    thanx for commenting on my poem "The sky is Black" anywyas, this is a well though up poem! great flow and though! i liked how I almost had a feeling of being where it was you were talking about! anyways, thats whatI wanted to say 5/5
    -Rachel

  • 18 years ago

    by Cady

    Oh my. I really like this one. It has alot of truth and meaning behind it.
    Kudos!

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Very well done sweety. I like this poem a lot. Sea, night, snow, fire, very beautiful. Sometimes I feel that way to, that I'm my worst enemy. You wrote it down in a beautiful way. Perfect. 5/5 Excellent. Take care sweety -xxx-

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