So Low Tonight

by Torn   Nov 24, 2005


I can't deal with this pain,
I know I've said it all before.
But I've given up on this,
I'm tired of being on the floor.

I can never get back up,
It seems I'm just too heavy.
There's just too much burden,
That i cannot carry.

My friends...who are they?
I can't see one in sight.
They've all given up on me,
They had no will to fight.

This world is so pointless to me,
I'm sick of feeling like i do.
Nothing can change these thoughts,
There's no way i can pull through.

I am so empty,
I'm nothing at all.
Constantly complaining,
On why i always fall.

I'll miss you dearly,
You mean the world to me.
But it's better off this way,
I'm going to be free...

*when i say I'll miss you-it means all of u guys..you know who u r...I've grown to care and love a lot of u so much...
Feeling so goddamn low tonight...the thought's always there...
please comment and vote..
Love always oxox

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rhinehalt

    Very well written. Keep up the good work. You're a great poet.

  • 18 years ago

    by HighPerfection

    I love the poem and totally can relate obviously u have alot of people that care about you keep it up i love it soo much stay strong!

  • 18 years ago

    by HighPerfection

    I love the poem and totally can relate obviously u have alot of people that care about you keep it up i love it soo much stay strong!

  • 18 years ago

    by *~*pureconfusion15*~*

    You gotta lotta heart and ur a very gud writter!..... oxox wen ur down breath and let every breath you take in lift u up!.... wen u feel noons around to say that they care even i'll be there 4 you ( even tho u dnt even know me)

    Luv--- Kelly

  • 18 years ago

    by cynthia

    This is how i feel sometimes but always remember keep your head up you can achive your goals well wish you da best