When she fell

by Stephy   Feb 15, 2006


Beautiful and funny
Smart and happy
For all it was a given fact
But deep down it was just a happy act

She had her family, she had her friends
The relationships finished with a tragic end
They could of seen it but they weren't watching
The whole time it was something they were missing

She cried herself to sleep every night
Inside she had no more fight
Cutting herself just to watch herself bleed
When a little comfort is all that she need

Of course there was a boy who was never there
He broke her heart and didn't even know or care
Yes they were friends and told each other everything
But she never found the courage to add that extra something

There was always people around
But that in-her-place feeling was never found
She decided to disappear
With in her eye one last tear

She wrote a note
With one last quote:
''I love you all
but none of you were there to catch me when I fall''

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty

    Really and truely touching!!
    well doneh huni
    keep it up
    xxxx mwah xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Steph

    Thats beautiful. heartbreaking but beautiful. I can def relate to this too. i love how u can put it into words and make it sound so awesome. its amazing.
    take a look at some of my poems too maybe?:)

  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Sad but still lovely.
    people never pay enough attention to what they have.
    but she shoulda said something.
    you never know unless you talk to that SOMEONE.
    neways 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    Beautiful hunn.. Really love it!!:) Sass -xxxxxxx- luv ya

  • 18 years ago

    by lOVER

    Awwww such a beautifully tragic story, i loved it!
    really well done i liked it a lot!!

    thanks for commenting on a lot of my poems my sweet x)
    so i thought it was my turn to return the favour xP

    nice writing

    xx take care my dear