X Blindness

by Sole   Feb 24, 2006


Each time I see your face I jump
Adrenaline rush makes my heart thump
Those rocks which I fly above
This soul thats driven on by love
I have sat with tears in eyes
Thought 'Put an end to all these lies'
Pressed tight to skin, cold, metal knife
Who would care if I took my life?
But as you live I cannot die
You are my heart, keep me alive
I feel upset, then you walk in
Heal my smile, and heal my skin
I don't know why I feel this way
You never listen, never stay
You always take and rarely give
And yet it is for you I live
You always talk and never ask
You live for now, forget the past
You have a shallow mind it's true
You cannot see that
I
Love
You.

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  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    Wow! this poem is good! "I have sat with tears in eyes
    Thought 'Put an end to all these lies'
    Pressed tight to skin, cold, metal knife
    Who would care if I took my life?"
    absolutely nice lines... emotions are really engraved in the words you wrote... i'm really a critic wen it comes to commenting.. and i can actually say that this is good altho it was short.. good poems makes me crave for more.. u could've made this longer.. =D

  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Awww, thats so sad and sweet, i understand this so well.... another great poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Maiya

    What a beautiful poem hun.. I feel like I can really relate. The flow & ryhme-scheme was great! Fantabulous ending ;)..

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Great job!! You had excellent flow and rhyming to it .. More towards the end.. You did an excellent job ending it .. it was an all around great poem .. Keep writing!!!

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    This is an amazing poem, I love the wording you have used, great job keep them coming hun sarah x

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