X The Tears Of Broken Souls

by Sole   Mar 27, 2006


I see the pouring rain
Another poor soul cries
And I wallow in their pain
I see through their eyes

I see a darkened room
Blurred through countless tears
I see impending doom
And infinite fears

I see a secret, untold
And a whip with which to hurt
I feel the frost cold
The boot that kicks into the dirt

I see the pouring rain
Another poor soul cries
And I wallow in their pain
I see through their eyes

I see a child lay
In the arms of Hate
Abused in every way
And sacrificed to fate

I see a silver blade
Edged with crimson red
I see a life fade
I see a child, dead

I see the pouring rain
Another poor soul cries
And I wallow in their pain
I see through their eyes

I see a troubled man
Ancient, in despair
No-one to hold his hand
In old-age no-one's there

I see a womans life
Stood out, in the yard
A man who beats his wife
Another person scarred

I see the pouring rain
Another poor soul cries
And I wallow in their pain
I see through their eyes

As the rain continues down
I see we have to change our goals
Or everyone will drown
In the tears of broken souls.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Oh, its so sad, it was full of emotion and captured me from the start
    xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    Wow. this is so sad. i lvoe how you repeated it and made it all work well tgohether. i felt so sad as the poem progressed through. it had so much emotion. this is FOR SURE my favourite of your writes. you are so talented. keep it up.

    Kat

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©

    I Loved Once Again The Word Usage, I Admire The Repetition Of a Very Talanted Stanza, I Can't Believe I've Never Noticed You Before 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Brigitte

    Wow…. Wow… Wow…Wow…Wow! Did I say Wow? You are an absolutely, magnificent poet! Every piece you write just leaves me in a state of shock! This poem flowed perfectly I didn’t stumble on any of the words at all! Not to mention the topic of the poem was so deep and intellectual! I love how you make your poems very deep but also very simple and meaningful!

  • 18 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    This poem was pretty good. The message was good the rhyming was good some of the lines needed to be a little longer and fourth line it should be "through" not "throught"

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