Take These Emotions

by ŘÅÇĦ♥   Apr 20, 2006


Take these emotions
stuff them in a bottle
put the cap on
Put them in a room
with concrete walls
Where only the Walls can see
How I feel,They'll never tell
My emotions overflow
and soon the room begins
to flood
little cracks make my emotions come out
I trusted YOU concrete walls?!?!
you Managed to let me down
Like everyone else
ever has or done.

Rach ♥

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  • 15 years ago

    by loving my kids tessa and savannah

    Good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    Gosh this is really good. Although the flow and length isn't as great as it could be, it is such an amzingly unique poem which draws you into it, I just wish it was longer! I really like this one, keep writing you are great =D
    - Polly xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    Gosh this is really good. Although the flow and length isn't as great as it could be, it is such an amzingly unique poem which draws you into it, I just wish it was longer! I really like this one, keep writing you are great =D
    - Polly xx

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