Perfect

by ŘÅÇĦ♥   Apr 20, 2006


Perfect family
Perfect life
Perfect smile
Is that what you see
when you look at me
The smile it's fake
MY life a mistake
My family is pretending to be
what they want to be
Pretty much like me
fake

RACH ♥

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  • 15 years ago

    by loving my kids tessa and savannah

    Good

  • 17 years ago

    by gasping for air

    Short but good, keep it up!!!
    amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    Very short, but powerful writing. I think if you made another stanza with the same sort of thing it would be better, but it's still good how it is. Take care,
    - Polly xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aw This is sad! Great job though 5/5

    `natalie xx

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