Death (a beautiful thing)

by deeplydesturbed   Jun 18, 2006


Death is something
we must all do
death is something
I'd love to go through

what did i do
to be here in this place
why cant i die
and be buried in a space

a hole in the ground
all dark and scary
i would love to see
what its like to be buried...

i want to die
you cant stop me now....
i just need to think
of the perfect way how....

i could be hung,
slit my wrists
whatever the way
i wouldn't be missed

i am here
only to live
what a stupid reason
now i must give

give up my life,
give you yours
shut your trap and
stop using lures

if you wanted me
to really be here
you could've paid more attention
opened your ears...

i must say goodbye,
or goodnight
whichever one helps
to turn off my light.....

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  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I can so relate
    Keep writing
    All the very best.

  • 8 years ago

    by Sai

    I think everyone is bound to go down this dark path at least once in their life. You have depicted these dark thoughts in a way that most people could connect with, myself included. Hopefully you dont feel these things anymore, that you've overcome these dark thoughts. I find that writing them down helps.

    • 8 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks Sai. Im actually receiving constant help.

  • 8 years ago

    by chandelier

    wow!
    i mean , I've always wanted to write something like this but couldn't get hold of the right words. You just nailed it :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Alec

    This is beautifully twisted. Love it. Its raw, and its the truth as you see it.

    Personally, I love change, new faces, places, partners... the more the merrier in more ways than one.
    ~Alec

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A vibrant emotional piece beautifully written that echoes a question asked by .any at some time or an on other. You have an eloquent way with words

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