Ashes to Ashes

by Bridgette   Aug 9, 2006


I lay here drenching my pillow with tears of loneliness and pain
Searching for the right words to say to bring you back to me again
I constantly inhale the deadly smoke of my past
And watch as my whole world just burns to ashes

Shaking uncontrollably as I choke back unshed tears
I just pray to God you will here my silent pleas
The walls of life are closing in and my mind is blank
You were my everything, my hopes, dreams and fears

I've removed your picture only to discover a gaping hole in my heart
I try helplessly to mend the shattered life that you left behind
I'm numb to everything except my increasing pain
And even that somehow comes and goes

I've lost you once again to the selfishness of my heart
And this time I know, you are truly gone forever
But you'll always be in my heart, my one and only
And I'll love you forever from ashes to ashes, and dust to dust

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  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I've removed your picture only to discover a gaping whole in my heart
    ((hole))

    I really liked this... It was strong with emotion and really said a lot in just a little poem. Good job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by gabrielle.Xx

    BRAVO!! i like this poem alot.. so raw and different.. X (please check out my poems / vote comment or add me to your faves... thanks) X

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    Pray to God you will HEAR (not here)

    Other than that, I like it. And I like how it's not tied to any style of writing or rhyming scheme, it just flows on its own from the heart.

    *hugs*

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Awesome Poem! You deserve a 5/5 no less! It flowed smoothly, I liked the last staza the best :) great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Wow that was really good. definitely good imagery and wonderful job getting across your emotions... i felt the pain and anger, i'm so sry for everything, but this really was a great poem... definite 5/5 keep up the good work

    Mousie

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