by Gem Dec 30, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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The tears I cry |
by Cathy
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I love this poem! I read a few of your others you write amazing poetry. I wish I can get into your love poems, Im sure Ill enjoy reading those as well. But anyways just commenting cause this poem was very well written and also cause I can relate to the feeling. |
by Kaila
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Ahhh i love how u started every stanza with the same thing great job |
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Fix some minor spelling mistakes. But I love the rhyme scheme. |
by Farukh
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WOW GEM, you are really a gem. So lovely...you made me cry..........!!!!!!! well done...... |
by stefanie
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I can relate to this one as well except i know our love is true but we just have our ups and down and a while back we had a lot of those... its nice to know that someone can actually write about how i feel, haha even if you dont.... great great poem |