What Do You Do? *

Over it was pretty good 5/5

marcella

I really liked this poem, you wrote out what a lot of people are feeling and keep bottled up inside, i can't imagine how you must be feeling about this guy but it sounds to me like you've got it bad, i just hope things work out for the best for ya :)
Another great write and a 5/5 from me
Well done.

So touching and beatifully written,so great,well done,5/5

Mm crappy feelin indeed, but also the nicest. error; he don't --> doesn't

This poems great... good job,
you have alot of talent! :)