Trying To Hold On

Hello Cindy,

I hope this finds you better...

This is heart wrenching poem, pleading for support, for love. It is bitterly sad as one should never have to ask, let alone 'beg'.

I like the alternating refrain. This is clever and I have never thought of doing this and may do in the future.

Take care Cindy, always hold on.

Michael ((hugs))

GOOD FLOW EXCELLENT WRITE. BEAUTIFUL

Again... tears! i can feel your sadness in your writtin... and at the same time... i also feel he is waiting for you on the other side nana!!! love you

Again Cindy, you captured so much emotion with your words.
loved every part of this one.
love your friend, Tara-Kay

Though i love all of ur poems...but poems with this sort of theme....i just love them.....i so very much adore ur love poems

Stay here with me
Help to keep me strong
Hold me so tightly
In your arms I belong

lovely write indeed

all the best and take care