Clown

I think i see a metaphor in there,..and i thought it was pretyy clever. Very nice poem..short and sweet, and yet descriptive. flow is awesome as usual:).keep it up 5/5

This poem was great it to me showed how people put on masks to cover up what they want to hide i loved it 5/5

I loved this. . Its so sad and packed with emotions. . . I love it 5/5

Laura
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I like this a lot. it is short and simple, but it is so full of sadness. wonderful, visually. the lipstick on the bed- wow. tremendous! love it! 5 for you! -beav