The repetive element really adds to this. The rose seems like a beautiful symbol for a person. More like a young woman, or a fighting lady. My biggest issue was the words. They were amazing, but the constant excessive feeling. They overflowed the poem. It distracted the flow, a bit.
Other than that, this is absolutely mindblowing.
I was sure I had read this before. I'm too lazy to go and check through all the comments to see if I've left one before, but anyway...
This was simply a serene and beautiful read. You really know how to capture your readers and take them in. I felt like I was watching a movie, as if this "rose" could be a metaphor for a person in a movie.
This was such a unique piece, really different and an enjoyable read. Calm and peaceful which is truely beautiful. The imagery just gorgeous. Each stanza was written in great depth. A simple topic which was created to become unique. Well done on this. 5/5~mel