by ~*SugarCube*~ Mar 22, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
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When I felt like nobody cared. |
by Goran Rahim
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Yet another great one, i felt like that for a person too, and i totally believe she s n angel that was sent from above, great job |
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I liked how you used "when" over and over again. It made the poem stronger, I think. Great job. |
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Aww..this poem was really sweet it was simple and sweet....its like my 3 s its simple sweet and short... and u hav all 3 good job =) |
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Really good .i gave you 5 , keep up the great work . |
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Very well written. You did a great job on this poem. I loved the emotion and it was really sweet. Keep it up 5/5 |