Spreading My Wings

This one is so beautiful. I know what you feel. It brought tears to my eyes.

Cindy
I know he is waiting to take your hand once more. You will be reunited with your true love once again. Somewhere over that rainbow that always makes you smile.

Like the gulls soaring gracefully
Up in the wondrous sky
Soon I will spread my wings
And into your arms I'll fly

I really liked your ending all the best.5/5

A beautiful piece allowing your true love to shine through. Breathtaking.
Excellent.

"Surviving natures furies
Till death left an icy chill" -- and so do those lines gave me the chills...

This was, yet again, a beautiful piece. I was rendered speechless, yet captivated by the descriptions that you've penned, vividly, in this poem. My real pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing.
Hope you all the best in life and take care.
Love,
Debbie

First off, amazing job.
It was heartbreaking to read, though amazing. It was a wonderful dedication to your husband. Just from your poems, I can tell you miss him terribly.

"Your love moved my heart
Like the ocean moves the sand
Crashing like waves on the beach
You were there to take my hand"

^ By far, my favorite stanza! Just wow. The imagery in this poem was flat-out perfect. Spectacular job, keep writing! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.