One Night Of Bliss ( Collab)

What lovely word pictures, 'Kiss me beneath my skin' 'Let me breathe for you' A marvellously emotional poem of the need for intimacy. Thank you.

Great poem made. Two birds hitting one stone, breaks the hearts of cold.

Ray

Cindy
Again you and End Of Eternity have out done yourselves with this piece. Very sensual and full of passion. It's hard to believe the way the two of you can put these together living across the world from one another. Excellent work.

Blend with my soul tonight
And let me breathe for you
Wrap my heart within yours
Melting one body, no more two

Pacifying our bodies needs
Losing myself in your kiss
Your touch leaving memories
Of our one night of bliss

These were my favorite parts.
All the best
Ben

Wow, very beautiful poem. I love all the lines. It's a wonderful poem.

Kiss me beneath my skin
Drink my lips sweet like wine
Play with my lonely fingertips
Touch every vein of mine

still not sure which is the best verse........

love is.......