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by Independence Forever May 18, 2007
Sadness, depression /
A man's outlook on death
a gun shot, the silence breaks
pictures of friends, birthday cakes
a drop to the ground, a hard smack
mamma's breakfast, a pancake stack
the loss of blood, growing too faint
working at the shop, the smell of paint
eyes dimming, can barely see
small children, hugging on me
cruel laughter, a madman departs
a young protege, wisdom imparts
darkness, death, the waiting, all bad
a horrible dream, but the best i ever had
by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight
Flows beautifully together...you have amazing talent. keep it up
One word: dayummm lol yes u might just be thinking that im only commenting u b/c u commented me and to tell u the truth im in school right now and shouldnt even be on this site but lol i can not stop reading your poems i alwasy like how u end them
Wow amazing.nice flow i like the way that the top line symbolizes the mans feelings and the bottom line sybolizes the mans thoughts..truly amazing.
5/5 poem !!!!! Great job!!!
by Nykkiicia Cion
Darkness becomes u...