I'm Sick of These People

I couldn't agree more - i no unhappiness can be powerful, but still. we all have probs, but some of us don't let them rule our lives!!! you couldn't have written this better!!!!

"LIVE LIFE TO THE FULLEST
and you won't regret a day."

This statement I abosulutely agree. No one should be thinking they had their life the worst. I've seen wrost things, know people with worser things, and they kept smiling wihtout any help. Peace. 5/5

This poem was simple as was the word choice but i think it worked effectively. I thought the meaning was ok but as the same time i think alot of people will not like it expecially those who you say your sick of. The flow ws good throughout this. A good effort~mel

The rhyming here was excellent, as was the flow. I kind of understand what you're getting at with this poem, well I DO understand, however, I don't think it's fair to say you're SICK of these people. Each to their own opinion, though. All I would say though is, anybody has the right to act how they want, and live their life the way they want to. Yeah, they may not appreciate what they've got, their life may not be getting lived to the fullest, but that's THEIR problem. And they're the ones that will suffer for it in the long run.

Anyhow, I'm blabbing now. Lol. Overall, it was an interesting read.

Hahaha I feel you with this poem lol If you keep your head up and go out and get happiness, you won't have to kill yourself lol 5/5