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by Dee May 26, 2007
Sadness, depression /
Every scar on my wrist tells a story of my past,
how i was upset and didn't want to last,
Every scar on my wrist is the pain i wanted to show,
The pain that i felt that no one else would know.
Evey night i cried I'd cut a little more,
to take away that pain to try and stop this war.
Every feeling that i felt didn't seem real,
no one understood the pain i could feel.
Every scar on my wrist bleed and felt good,
the scars i have from my painful child hood.
I cut them so people would see the pain i go through,
But i hide them so people don't know what true.
Every scar that i have reminds me of my pain,
how my life has changed and will never be the same
They told me i was depressed that i would be ok,
just to take theses pills and it all would go away.
Every scar on my wrist is a fight that I've won
and all the blood on my wrist is the battle I've begun
Wow i love this ones. it flows beautifully, and i can real "feel" the words. somthing i can relate to, well done
Too easy to relate to it...
i loved the ending especially...
You know that every line of your poem realy relates to me. its awesome . you got alot of talent. i loved your this poem and i am gonaa ad it in my favourite poem so take care 5/5
by fatal bliss is the best way to die
Damnnnnnn this is effn amazing i really liked it i can totally relate i loved it 5/5 ~melissa~