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by Loved In Hell Jun 19, 2007
Sadness, depression /
A poets dreams are heard by the wind
tears of pain stream from the face
out of the soul
and out of your embrace
a poets words come out of the heart
and into the ears
of unsuspecting people
and linger for years
reminding us of life's truest feeling
the beauty of words
and a new way of dealing
a poets mind
is the most confusing place to be
a very fearful plea
a poets life
is so adventurous and unplain
even if its just the heart
life for a poet is just not sane
a poet must hold onto something
even if its just them
pain, love, anything at all
one thing in their life must be a precious gem
by Cyber Saiyan
What a great opening line, it really grabbed my attention.
Great job yet again, I really love the "a poets mind is the most confusing place to be indescribable sites a very fearful plea"
Reading through the rest of the poem, I like the repeated words A POETS. It seemed to reiterate the meaning.
Overall, the flow was great and the meaning was pretty cool.
Keep up the great work.
Great job on this!!! Wonderful idea for a poem. It is written so well and full of great word choice and emotion. You did a great job on this! keep it up! :]
Beautifully written poem. It is very true, topic is great. Very unique piece, it has superb atmosphere and it is very deep, touching and emotional.
Well done! 5/5
This is a very true poem...i think all poets can agree to this...although in some parts the rhyming seems a little forced to me..but thats just what i think..overall very good poem.
by Dark Reaper
A wonderful poem. Flow of the words was great. And its so very true and the words are from deep in the heart. 5/5 from me.